Reviews for The Longing - FictionPress.com

Jay-Ling 2005-06-04 ch 1,	abusei luv it. its kinda hard 4 me 2 explain but i really like it. maybe if u want u could check out some of my poems...if u want
Celesma 2005-06-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very good poem! The only line that feels out of place is "like my chest needing a knife."