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| tainted x love 2005-06-04 ch 1,   | wow.. very unique & genius. i love the satiric tone it gives off. |
| Katrina Gabrielle 2005-06-04 ch 1, | good job, I like it, especially the last lines. It's a cool poem. |
| lackluster 2005-06-04 ch 1, | i literally held my breath! wow, i love this poem, the way it starts and the way you ended it...mesmerizing! |
| E. Hisifithith 2005-06-04 ch 1, | haha, this is great. it's not a very happy poem, but it's really great. very spiteful. "You look at me and laugh/As you swallow it" that line is the best. i really reminds me of "The Shower Scene" and "Seventy Times Seven" by Brand New. brand new i my favorite band, and anything that reminds me of them i think is the greatest. i really like this poem. keep on writing great stuff like this!-savannah |