Nice imagery. Nice use of the mythology, too. Once again, the structure works great.

I love the formatting that graces your poems and this is no exception.

Even without your formatting here the imagery and word usage was fantastic. It's excellent to see you can let other attributes of your style take the lead in different pieces. Quality

made me shaky. reminiscent of black coffee (even though you did mention it. oh well).

beautiful. just breathtakingly gorgeous! _

!* noelle *!

i like the unique formatting here; very good and interesting writing!

awesome.. love the last line