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Reviews For: The Last Knight

Sahara Hayden
2005-06-05
ch 1,
O...this sounds very promising. I really liked the way you dsecribed the knight and the burning town. Please update soon!~Sahara~
swaggering curses
2005-06-04
ch 1,
I like the sense of honor and tragedy that you convey. It seems almost like a metaphor for the death of a country or something. I think that your sentences are a little choppy, especially at the beginning, but overall it's well done and I like your word choice -- "quixotic" is such an awesome word. Lovely! =)
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