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| Sahara Hayden 2005-06-05 ch 1, | O...this sounds very promising. I really liked the way you dsecribed the knight and the burning town. Please update soon!~Sahara~ |
| swaggering curses 2005-06-04 ch 1, | I like the sense of honor and tragedy that you convey. It seems almost like a metaphor for the death of a country or something. I think that your sentences are a little choppy, especially at the beginning, but overall it's well done and I like your word choice -- "quixotic" is such an awesome word. Lovely! =) |