Wow 'lyssa... this is really good. I like the underlying tone of sad and happy memories. It is different from stuff that I usually read... a nice change of pace ^_^

Keep up the great work,Blaze the Unmaker (you know me ^_~)

Nice; you've created a very unique poem. It's got originality to it. I like it. ^^

Wow...that must have been one interesting dream lyssa. anyway...it was good, I liked it. Well yeah keep writing Bi.

O...very spiff. One (hopefully) constructive comment--the word "memoirs" in the fifth line from the end is a little...off. It doesn't really seem like it wants to be there. The only thing I can think of to suggest as a replacement is "memories," but I'm not sure if that'll work with the meter or not. *shrug*

Other than that, though, very good poem. I can actually see myself thinking somewhat along those lines when I come back to North Olmsted to visit...although I somehow don't think I'll be quite as nostalgic. I hate this city :P Good work, hun ^_^

Oh wow!! Is this your first song? Mizu, this is so much better than anything I've churned out, seriously! ...I tried to figure out which one is Mandi...o.o; Didn't do so well. I think it's Trish. XD Sherri = Jessi, obviously. Kirsten...no clue. But in all seriousness, I love it!! Did you just write this today or...? And you were complaining about people leaving, so is that where the inspiration came from? o.o? And of course I'll help you castrate your brother! He's an evil bastard! ...You'll be lucky if I don't throw him on the pyre at BurnFest. Well, Ash-chan says this is WONDERFUL(no matter what you say), and she is off to play more of Flash Flash Revolution...until the parentals bend to her will and give her DDR instead. ¬¬