hehe...I'm named after her...

I liked your Bio by the way. I found the platipus quote ammusing.

Thanks for the review that you gave me around fifty years ago that I never bothered to reply to.

Alex what poem for L.A. was that?

Good/Great

sincerly, MR. Fish!

I like the imagary. Great poem! I love Artemis!

(sorry if my spelling is off on anything)

I love how "bay" has a line to itself. Shocking imagery, very striking.

i luv artemis! she is one of my favorite goddesses besides athena..i luv mythology cuz it's like reading stories...i like this poem a lot...i noticed in your profile that you are a christian...yet u are dissing them at the bottom of your profile..i must say that it is realli confusing...are u being hypocritical? well it's none of my beezwax but i was just curious...

love the poem! thanks for the review!

much love, GB

I don't know why, but I have never like Artemis...she seems like a drama queen... maybe its just me

So mystical. A few spelling mistakes.I read it a couple times to see what different aspects I could see.

o! I like this part: "She is Artemis, Maiden of the Forest". I have a thing for garden andd forests...

Hey, I like that, it's really good. You should write more like this. It's sounds really cool when you read it. That's an awesome poem! Keep up the good work!

Yunie19

i liked it. i am always a fan of breezy flowy poems like

Just a few mistakes:

1. ANd

2. Loose packed dirt. You can't have loose packed dirt. It's either packed or loose.

The flow was right, and I think this is better without rhymes. Maybe you could make certain lines longer... add some weight to it.

That was very pretty, and I personally think it catches the true nature of the goddess. Keep on writing.