Whats next, whats next?

Come on, you've got to continue this. Hey, it snagged my attention, and its quite good--and it can get even better! I loved your other story by the way. 'S E X and Other Words of Love' though the part where Logan and Lisa get together was a little quick and not that clear...

Anyway, see yah!

-Jessi

NO!
OH MY GOD.
You seriously did not just stop there.
I love this story and Charlie Lightning is a hott name.

Hahahahaha... My friend and I used to nickname EVERYONE when we were young. Everyone we hated, everyone we liked. We even had weird names for people we didn't know. I guess we still kinda do it now...

BUT ANYWAY!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AND I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER AND EVER BECAUSE I LOVE CHARLIE LIGHTNING!

Hmm.Okay I Like It.Much.
The Striker Bit Made Me Laugh. I Give Different NickNames ((iguess)) To All My Friends Crushes Or Dates. Got On This One Guys Nerves One Time Because I Thought He Was Really Skinny And A A Bit Of A Dork. So I Called Him Wherkal Only Because He Reminded Me Of The White Earkel.
Oops. That Was Babbling..Crap I'm Stil Doing It.

UPDATE SOON!!

Oh I can't wait to see what happens!

Hey! this sounds like a pretty good story so far, im interested to see where it goes from him. i like it. update soon

Simply smashing start, dear. I can't wait to see the rest of it! Keep going!

omg, thats awesome. you HAVE to write more!

this story is funny..i love it

it's been awhile since you updated this story, but i do hope you continue it..enjoyed it heaps

I already like this story. Nice start. Update soon! ^_^

eh? I luff it! ^-^ I think the whole plot is so aweshum ... and I know how lacey will feel ^^; ah...yesh I know it's a bad thing but what can you do? It just sorta happens...Well another one of your wonderful stories Mara I can't wait for more...of course when can I wait for more? heh...oh and I noticed that this isn't in 1st person I am amazed! *claps* YAYS for Mara ^-^

Hmm, I like it.

Oi! This looks good! Can't wait for more!

Lol...that gay act was hilarious! I was totally **, though, when I went to the bottom of the page and didn't see the button that carries me to the next chappie! Gr! Lol, update soon!

HAHAH cocky boys are funny. n.e.ways write more.