...what did you do? Yes it was written well but if something happens between you and Tina I'll be sad (yes, me...the unimportant one)! I'm sorry to hear about your problems Love...I hope it works out (for the better).

Morbid Maxwell

very good...so much emotion expressed...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

I love it. The sadness, the passion, the longing. Meh, the line 'I wish I could shout to the world I’m gay' i relate to. Good job, and I'm sorry. I adore the three lines you put in the summary, they sent chills up my spine.

that is so romantic i wish i was that lucky girl its so sad i hope things get better with you two