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| teddy bear 2005-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this story! It's really cool. Iknow your going to go far with this story. It's always good to have a characters not to like each other at first. |
| Kaji D.A 2005-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseNice very awesome! is there gonna be more? ... nope cuz i moved.-Lacy- |
| Calypso Silverhawk 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseVery cool. Much better with the prologue at the beginning, though the story still has some mysterious and unexplained factors to it. Good job. And how dare you use my real name! jk ^-^' |