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| ThatGirlInBlack 2005-08-01 ch 1,   | I agree 100% thank you for speaking your opinion |
| versechorusverse 2005-06-06 ch 1, | Uh...hello? This is America. You know, the place where everyone is "equal". (Note the quotation marks) |
| SaSSsySaSSer 2005-06-05 ch 1, | hahaha gay people are just.. well.. gay.. |
| Wainwright 2005-06-05 ch 1, | People? they're not! knock me down with a feather if they're not all satan's own children out to dominite the free world with their nefarious homosexual agenda and their lifestyle... You know, this could go in essay (unless by putting it in fiction you actually mean to make some weird ironic right-wing statement...) Also small tip- the capitals make it look like your shouting. So when you read it in your head it sounds really odd. And it's rather unstructured and a bit jumbled. As I think this is meant to be a serious essay, about a serious subject but it's too informal. However, I agree with your politics. |
| aperfectfifth 2005-06-04 ch 1, | *applause* |
| heroin zombie 2005-06-04 ch 1, | Please stop filling up this site with your **. I agree with you, 100%, but this is a site for creative writing. Please, leave this place instead of taking up space. |