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Rainbowelectric 2008-07-23 ch 13,	abuseOH my goodness. I've spent the better part of an hour reading and I have to reiterate...OH my goodness. I am completely and totally smitten with Daniel. I mean words fail me. And Sam le sigh. You've drawn so beautifully this wonderful story. Your eye for detail is delightfully acute. Your characterization is marvelous. The flow of the story is seamless. The dialogue is flawless and just wonderful. I'm so glad Daniel was so tenacious in his pursuit of Sam. In case you couldn't tell...I love it. :)
xxxmusic is lifexxx 2008-07-19 ch 13,	abuseOMIGOD! Gimmee MORE! LOL! I was laughing so hard at my visual of Mr. Riley's expression, tehe! YAYS! They've KISSED!! For the first time, they actually SHOW each other how much they like each other and I was like SQUEALING! And I'm not the squealing kind of girl, haha! OH! Write more, Write more, WRITE MORE! Sorry, now I'm just starting to sound like a small child begging for cookies or something. Oh! And on the subject of cookies, you get some for your AMAZING story. And thanx for making the chapters long. It seems like NO ONE knows how to write a nice long chapter - including me - 'cept for YOU! WOT!
the-typical 2008-07-17 ch 13,	abuseD: cliffhanger? Why??!! Please please please please update again soon. I'll get on my knees and beg if I need to! :D I hope to see more soon, I've really been enjoying this story, I adore everyone's witty sarcasm, it's very fun to read. So, please keep going!
TheCresentMoonWriter 2008-07-09 ch 13,	abuseThat is a GREAT place to leave us hanging at! I LOVE this story! I have no clue about any of the intruments and stuff but Its fun to read all of the same. I LOVE Daniel! I also LOVE Sam! Hope you update soon! ;D
a beginner 2008-07-04 ch 13,	abusei joined today, ur doing good... i like the sort... keep updating...
Ty Taco 2008-06-19 ch 13,	abuseOh. Mi. Jeez!! AH! Finally, they kiss. Oh. I'm sad about what Kyle said though. I read this chappie, then re-read what he said. He was right. This all HAS to end. Band camp may in fact be the last time they ever see each other. -TEAR STREAM DOWN FACE OF OVERLY DRAMATIC QUEEN- I really really really like them together. I really do. I am begging you...please give this story a happy ending. Please. I will be so sad if they leave and never see each other again or something. hahahahahahaha xoxoxoxoxox, Ty
Ty Taco 2008-06-19 ch 5,	abuseSam is SEVERELY bothering me. I hope he gets a little less annoying as the story goes on. Gah. I wanna frackin hit him!! xoxoxoxo, Ty
Denny Starbucks 2008-06-19 ch 13,	abuseI'm one of those! ...people who stumbled upon this fic by accident and didn't run. XD I was on a slash hunt so yeah. Anyways, I just felt the need to post a review. Reading this has just been so damn great. Which is why I anticipate the next chapter. Love how you write from this point of view. I'll be checking out some of your other stories. I'll probably get hooked on them too. great work, seriously. -Denny Starbucks.
Thread of Life 2008-06-13 ch 13,	abuseHaha wonderful! I knew Riley would show up. This story is pretty great.
blackoblivion13 2008-06-10 ch 13,	abuseOh... Poor them! Mr. Riley is going to kill them isn't he?
Sit In Solemn Silence 2008-06-08 ch 4,	abuseYay! This story is so fresh and funny! (cliched review I know, but it's true)
Sit In Solemn Silence 2008-06-08 ch 2,	abuseHoly cazolis! you rock at descriptions! That place sounds like hell. Actually it sounds like dance camp... wait, there's a difference?
Sidderiffic 2008-05-31 ch 13,	abuse♥ So I personally think an update is in order! Awesome story and I love the characters~!
A Scarred Soul 2008-05-18 ch 13,	abuseOh wow, that was really hilarious! haha I'm so glad I started reading this story, it's absolutely brilliant! You have a wonderful writing style and your characters are well developed and very funny. I can't wait to read more!
Kittentits 2008-05-15 ch 13,	abuseSo uh, ever plan on updating this story? Cuz I gotta tell you, you've been killing us slowly for too long. Don't let this story die to artistic-cancer.

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