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Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 15XD I love the roof scene! And Dr. Miles' question at the end! *holds sides so they don't explode* That was great! Update soon, please! _ |
Griezula 12/12/08 . chapter 15I just spent the last two hours reading this. Now, normally, I probably could have read something of this length in an hour to an hour and a half. But I was savoring it. Because it's just that good. |
runaway sheet 12/12/08 . chapter 15YOu finalLY UPdateD! I LOVE YOU! I could marry you... unless you already are... in which case I'll help get rid of your spouse... I lies! I'll get rid of spousey-dearest by myself. No, but really, finally an update. I thought this story was like on Hiatus or something and I really really like the characters, but it's been so long, I had to backtrack like 2 chapters so I could remember what happened. YaY! Now, I'll go read the story... The Talk! What a shocker. I feel really sorry for Daniel. I loves him though, so when it doesn't work out with SAm... I'm right here! Seriously though, it's been a half month already since they met? WOw. I'm going to be so sad come the end of band camp... ... Daniel came back ... I wanna go to the rooftop too! Nicely written scene, hun. You say you don't like writing these scenes? Well, I think they are definitely not done the wrong way. I know whaat you mean by some times these scenes spoil the whole story. SAm feeling happy insted of sick sounds really sweet. Float, eh? Hahaha. Kya- Kyle! I'm kinda have love/hate feelings for him though. Miles really had to call at that time, eh? Pssh, teachers. Love them! ANd Sam has... marks by an octopus? interesting. I wanna congratulate Daniel too! I really like this story. You have to keep updating. I realize that these chapters are long and probably take you long to write, but you know, even small updates will be appreciated so the rest of us know that you haven't decided to stop this awesomeness of a story. So, reviews make you get urges to write, eh? hmm... That Miles, what's he mean by saying are you talking about you and me? Pssh! Old man. That was a relly funny way to end the chapter. I like this side of Sam. I know enough about masks to know how confusing it gets over when to use it and how liberating it is to be rid of them. Aw... I think Daniel really is something- got the patience of a ... hm... what's the saying again? Anyway, Please keep updating. I think it's funny how fp decided to give reviews like a word limit. Psh! Update and I'll throw in some sprinkles of 'Dial tone' merchandise. OOh, can I be your manager, and tell you not to eat so much candy (whilst stealthily consuming them) and then boss you around like I own you. I love that first chair- she inspires me. |
Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 13Finally! Go Daniel and Sam! That kissing scene...SO FREAKING AWESOME! But, NO! Not Mr. Riley! Gah! Must read on now! |
Sarahhwithanh 12/12/08 . chapter 15Great chapter! |
Vera Dicere 12/12/08 . chapter 15o_O dude. miles? is that just his understandable but kind of ridiculous misinterpretation of sam's rambling, or does he have some basis in his head to think that there might be something between them? odd. definitely looking forward to the resolution of that plot point. also- you nearly killed me with that 'talk' they had on the roof. i kind of just want to smack sam and tell him to quite being so stupid about this thing with daniel. he's admitted to himself that he a) is very attracted to daniel and 2) probably actually likes him a lot. *sigh* boys are so ridiculous sometimes. those two are definitely doing the whole '2 steps forward, 1 step back' thing, except sometimes it's more like 3 steps back. i like the tension, but at the same time, i'm seriously looking forward to some progress and resolution. and making out. more of that. :) |
Hell's first Icicle 12/12/08 . chapter 15the sheer genius of your writing takes my breath away. ) or something like it. and here's the thing...i'm reviewing! because when this update appeared in my inbox i had to read over the last 3 chapters to recall what had happened, seeing as i'd kind of forgotten. feed me. |
Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 11Uhm...wow. His dream...wow... *totally speechless currently* And...I LOVED this chapter! But that sucks that Sam left his piercings back at that house... |
ddz008 12/12/08 . chapter 15Great chapter! Sorry for being so late at reviewing this chapter and chapters 13 and 14. I was (and still am) very busy with school but today I decided to read all those chapters that I hadn't read... They have make so much progress! At some points I feel like I should hit Sam because he didn't understand that he has to be with Daniel, I'm glad that they kissed, that they sort of confessed what they feel and that they are trying to start over again. Their 'talk' was really sweet :) I wonder what's going to happen now, specially after Miles answer to Sam's question. Hope to see the next update soon! :) |
Annwyl 12/12/08 . chapter 15LOL. I so love it when you update. It generally makes my day. KEEP WRITING. |
violet hill 12/12/08 . chapter 15 There is just something about your writing. Like... it's so smooth, and the first part, when you were describing the roof,and the clouds and the sky, everything felt so... relaxing and calm, and the awkward tension was still there. I loved that part, it felt so calm. And the last bit, oh no! Hahha, Daniel's there are the worst possible times for Sam! Haha! |
Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 8Okay, I loved the elevator bit! It was full of hilarity! XD |
Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 5XD When Daniel burst into the room, I just about fell of the couch! *holds sides* Great chapter! |
Zyril 12/12/08 . chapter 4OMG! This was AWESOME! I love how they met in class! XD That was great! |
Cattails 12/12/08 . chapter 15When I saw that this had updated, I had a moment of squeeing and spazzing. Good moment. I absolutely loved this chapter Chock full of Sam and Daniel goodness I don't even know where to begin with how much I love it...the snappy dialogue just made everything perfect :D As always! They're so cute and awkward And tense. Goodness. And that last part with Miles? I couldn't stop laughing XD Miles is brilliant. I love him to pieces. Seriously. ...I am still snickering. :D |