|Reviews for Dial Tone|
| orbicland 8/8/05 . chapter 5
Oh gosh, yes. And you know what? I just love the way Daniel keeps on trying even though Sam's all like 'get the hell out of my face.' It reminds me why I love the fact I am literate and can read. And also think that band camp is funny, despite American Pie references.
| Esquirella 8/8/05 . chapter 5
Ah ha! Daniel is making some (small) progress!
| Esquirella 8/8/05 . chapter 4
*too busy cleaning up the coffee I spit out.*
| Esquirella 8/8/05 . chapter 3
*laughing* that was very cool!
| Esquirella 8/8/05 . chapter 2
I think this was a good, albeit short (LOL) chapter.
| Esquirella 8/8/05 . chapter 1
This is a very start.
| AppLEaves 8/8/05 . chapter 5
I admit... it WAS a bit ugly.
Uhh... wait... no. KATIE was ugly. I suppose she's one of those bimbos with bulging gross boobs and tops that look like bras with only a square inch of fabric added.
Bad mental image. REALLY bad.
I could understand why Daniel was all freaked out. I would've thrown a shoe at her, if I were him. But I'm not, so she's safe. (For now.)
And umm... can I have rice with the curry?
| rodeoclown 7/28/05 . chapter 4
I'm so glad I stumbled on your stories! They are very refreshing and original and you write well. I'm not sure which one I like best now...the suspense at the end of this chapter is killing me though...please update!
P.S. My favorite line: "My nerves, which had been poking out of my skin and curling around at the ends, slipped back into place as I realized that Daniel was not going to leap out and attack me."
| Jarf 7/26/05 . chapter 4
I hope you continue this soon. It's great so far. :D
| Jeoal 7/19/05 . chapter 4
Another story from you that starts off on an interesting note and just runs with it. It’s great how Daniel and Sam began their acquaintance with a random number on a bathroom stall because it’s something that could honestly occur, and I think that people always wonder just what would happen if they did call one of those numbers [though there’s a low standard that seems to go along with that, I suppose]. I’m wondering now why Daniel’s number was up on the wall to begin with, so I hope that you continue this soon and get us even more hooked on the plot. I especially like the gradually turned-playful/sarcastic banter between the two guys, and the fact that Daniel just happened to show up at the camp right after they started to talk on the phone. Call that a predicament. I can’t wait to see what they get into.
I’d review all four chapters because you really deserve more reviews than you’re getting. But I think you’d get tired of me pretty quickly, so I’ll save you the pain of that. It’s absolutely fantastic, and I hope to see another chapter of this soon, as well [as I’d Rather Not]. [and by the way, this ‘new style’ of yours is awesome, so no worries. ;-)]
| orbicland 7/19/05 . chapter 4
This is real great. The narrator's tone is great, a good mix between actual thought and description and dialogue... yeah, and I'm totally in love with your storyline cos it's just that entertaining. No, seriously.
| Ree 7/19/05 . chapter 4
That was an incredibly interesting way to start a story. I like the way that you take something like "A new kid shows up in band class! OMG!" and turn it into something completely new and amazing. I don't really know what to say. It's kind of embarrassing when I find a better writer than me who, for some reason, reads my stories. It's like going up to my math professor and saying, "Wow, you're really good at equations." Well, DUH.
I love the interactions in this. This review is kind of pointless because I don't know how to say any of the things I want to say, but still, I think you should know how amazing this story is. I hope you update soon, because this is really spectacular, and I'd love to see more. :D
| xhaiiro 7/14/05 . chapter 1
x_x I love your story!Must have more chapters..!x
| vintage-thought-processes 7/11/05 . chapter 4
O! O! I love this story! I do I do I do! It's so awesome! The plot line is too cool. I really love it. Oh my goodness. ((does weird happy hoppy dance)) Lovely! Gah! I can't think of anymore excited words but...wow! So good.
Thank you for providing my slash fix for the night although I'll be expecting another chapter soon, yea? This is SO good! ((puts on favs. list)) Can't wait for more! Do hurry! Please and thank you!
| Porn Yesterday 6/26/05 . chapter 4
Hehe, I'm enjoying this story so far from what I've read that is. I just KNEW it that Daniel would be coming to the camp that Sam was at when he mentioned it in the phone call, obviously a good thing _ Poor Sam though, now he's gonna be tortured by Daniel in real life and the cellphone if Daniel chooses to do so -.-; Hm...guess I should get technical now? Well let's see...from what I've read no grammatical errors and there's no problems with POV switching or the such. It's just when people do that sometimes it doesn't work out because of they way they do it, but if you're gonna do it I doubt I'll have problems so no wories of course! It's fun reading it Sam's POV of course though, insight and everything else that is good of course! I can't wait for the next chappie so I'll be waiting! Keep it up! ::cheers:: XD
Status: Impatiently Waiting