I like how you rymed your lines. I could also see how this could asily be made into a very good song if you wanted to.

I really love this poem. Can't say why exactly.. it's just all.. woah. I really like these lines 'Can this be de ja vu?, The vaguest,'I love you'?' I had it stuck in my mind for ages after I read it and it's really sad. The poem is sad, yet I really do think it's all romantic and sweet. Excellent.

What a lovely poem. Very nice.

Write on!

~Anna~