oh my gosh yay! i loved this chapter, and i love your writing. It's so witty and flowing and clear, a pleasure to read. Plus your story has great characters and plot. It was really powerful when Daron finally gave up on Aida, because you can really see how much she needs him. And i was so happy when she finally killed all those demons! Also, that's a killer last line...i REALLY can't wait until the next chapter.

Nice job!

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I like the idea of a conversation with God. ^_^

*gasp* you have to continue this story! I was so involved in it, it was so interesting and beautiful and intriguing, and then it stopped! and I want to know what happened! you'd better write more.

-L-