Reviews for PreConceived Conception

Arutha
2006-04-16
ch 1,

abuseWow, that was absolutely brilliant. I've written songs about the idiocy of judging others, but never a poem; if simply because I could never put the words together the way you have in this. i saw the title and just thought it sounded cool (had to make sure I hadn't reviewed it in the past first, though ;P). Boy am I glad I read it. I like how you did the ending too - it's the first time I think I've ever seen a part of a poem that's solely placed with the intent of being observed as opposed to being read. At any rate, amazing poem as always; keep it up ;P

Glowing Aura
2005-06-05
ch 1,

abuseBeautiful and full of truth, I especially love the ending where one more letter is being knocked off on each line. Great job.

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