|Reviews for War|
| somerandomdude 6/6/05 . chapter 1
Indeed, powerful haiku. I am reminded of line by Steven Erikson (a fantasy author, of all things...), something about the sheer horror and injustice of war being contained in a simple line like "children are dying." Very nice.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/5/05 . chapter 1
Very blunt, but that is what conveys the nature of such horror.
| Slowly Sinking 6/5/05 . chapter 1
Very strong, especially the last line. Brutally emotive.