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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-10 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this. I think it is my favorite piece so far that I have read from you. It is an interesting illusion of how we want our fairy tales to be. They never turn out to be that... reality sucks sort of piece. I love how you decided to use an inspiration from a dream to capture this poem. You have some awsome imagery again. You do a great job in painting pictures for your readers. My favorite line was: "once upon a time she was the raven haired step sister without a bottle of halogen highlights and peroxide prince charmings)" It reminded me of the movie Everafter for some reason. Beautiful. Great write. Bravo once agian. Write on. |
| sporkofdoom 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery in this is sharp, radiant, lovely. The scuffed fairy-tale overtones are superb. Did you ever read anything by Francesca Lia Block? This reminds me of her. |
| negligible fictional force 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseso damn beautiful, girl, how do you do it? -hecate. |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I love that it was inspired by a dream |
| not sure yet 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseso very interesting, i love your word choices as usual, and excellent imagery, muchly loved this |
| Aslan Israel 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful description of your dream... just haunting. |
| linaeve 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuselovely diction, as usual. the poem is stunning as it is; everything from "harlequin lovers" to "hibiscus lips" to the word-play-- beautiful. |
| smile persephone 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseIf only I had dreams that amazing. I think the poem is beautifully done. Though, I wouldn't know, I didn't have the dream. Something about her description is so sultry, dark, and even pure. (I know that I'm making no sense, so I'll shut up.) |
| poetic abortion 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abusethis is a beautiful pom. so vivid and almost alive, really opened my eyes and made me say: "wow". the dream is quite strange, and I think you did it justice in this poem. beautiful work. well done and keep it up! !~* noelle *~! |