Nice imagery captured with few words. This is a good haiku. However I urge you not to write something like "review me, I review you" in your summary, it sounds like a cheap bargain, and it will turn many people off. People should review if only they want to.

Beautiful haiku about such a tragic event. Great work!

An ageless beauty to this. I enjoy the alliteration.

Interesting haiku. I like your fantasy style ]

Mayumi