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| hoshi-chan590 2007-06-23 ch 1,  | abusenice parallelism(?) between the teacher & the girls note reminds me of the song "Don't Stand so CLose to Me" by The Police. its a good song you should check it out it was a really nice poem. not too deep & not too superficial. perfect balance. i have the feeling ive read your stories on fanfiction before... keep up the writing |
| Daughter-of-Louis 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI did this! well not with the same results :[ I feel in love with my history teacher in high school and I actually told him after I graduated! :X We are pretty close friends now tho so I dont mind :D teachers rock. |
| Jak Refynae 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI like. Good structure and I wanna see it as a story too! It sounds like it would really make a good one. ~ Jak & Aril, a.k.a. Jak Refynae |
| Miss-Nina 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHow ironic? Its a kind of funny poem, but sweet, too! Miss-Nina |
| CircusCandy 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseyeah! I like it. Both of them have the same feelings for eachother.You know, I always get crappy grades in science. I should write that witch a note like that. Then my grades will rise! oh yeah |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseit's cute! |
| Mephistophilis 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAww... Thjat's shoo Kawaii!! X3 I wuvs it! It has emotion, at least, I felt some of it... And it's so... jsut shoo... Ah! Kawaiiness! XD |
| lupinsmoon12391 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAw... I extremely liked this poem, well, because most of my stories are about older men and younger women. People tell me my stories border on disgusting, but who care? They're mine. Anyway, just a bunch of feel-good sap. If you turned this into an actual story it would be cool... |