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grip 2005-10-27 . chapter 1
i could never understand 'cutters'... your poem flows smoothly, and your message is well-taken. good job
Melinda Becker 2005-10-20 . chapter 1
have never cut.have wanted to.i hate knowing how you must feel here. it's easy to see the pain, the shame here.once again, great job.
SoLongJimmy 2005-08-12 . chapter 1
Woah.

This got me so close to home it wasn't even funny. The beginning needs a little work, but the end definently made up for it ten fold.
secret thoughts revealed 2005-08-05 . chapter 1
its a hard cycle to break and believe me i know cos ive been there be strong and write on
scorchingray 2005-07-02 . chapter 1
sux to b addicted to dutting eh? made u lie to ur friends. ouch. hope u find the strength to stop. ~luv
Disastrous Soul 2005-06-26 . chapter 1
Your really talented, i loved this poem and i could totally relate
i-rite-gud 2005-06-24 . chapter 1
That's kinda creepy...
chewing GUM 2005-06-10 . chapter 1
"The red doesn’t lie,"

WTf does that mean? other than that its awesome.
Mala Nocis 2005-06-08 . chapter 1
This poem hit home for me. Recent events have led me to give in. Many people have the same problem, but what can I say? Old habits die hard.
method acting 2005-06-07 . chapter 1
Great imagry, wonderful raw emotion. I hope this isn't yourself you are speaking of. Good piece though.
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-05 . chapter 1
this is good. Reminds me of how someone is going through...touching and sad but I like it alot. great work

~Sorrow~
samantha1990 2005-06-05 . chapter 1
"So that the people I love.Don’t see them." I know how that is. It hurts to see the ones who love you see the cuts and they think its from them. Only when they dont understand... Nicely written.
WiltingBlackRose 2005-06-05 . chapter 1
Hey...This is really good. I understand...more than you could know. Physical pain is addicting when emotional pain is so much worse. I hope you talk to the person you told you wouldn't do it anymore...If you haven't...show them this. I mean assuming this is all real that is...
Xox-Wings 2005-06-05 . chapter 1
Like I said befr your writing is great and you shoudl never think anything ese. What did you lie about? Anyway I'll ttyl with ya l8r bubi.
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