I felt the pain and anguish in this poem. Great job...

Jaded,SwimmerGirl

Lol.

I like how you ended this poem. A bit of humor for a bitter-sweet poem.

I love the wording and describtions.

beautiful, hun. beautiful.

yes, it is a bit dark for you, or something like that... but the language is very provocative and spontaneous, adding a nice zest to this work. self-expression is very evident. good job, keep writing.

~CM

well, this is a nice poem to just stumble across, huh? I was just checking the new things and this came up. Nice...very strong and very freaky at the same time (freaky to me is great, so that's a compliment!) XD keep it up! ~lightningSphinX~

Hard to find words to describe it... Quite angsty, but very, very good.