I like it. I got tripped up a bit at the part about the make-up, up until then you had been explaining things the correct way "She knows how to tie her shoes into perfect balanced bows" and then the make up one is backwards "And make up, she looks fine without" I guess it really doesn't matter and I am probably the only one who thinks it's weird. I'm sorry. Good work though.

Oh! Very impressive! I like how you compare yourself with another "perfect" person! This poem is beautiful and the beauty is through these powerful words. Thank u for sharing!

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It's so... so... Wow! It's just... Oh, I love it!

Brava, Bravi, Bravo, Excellent, Wonderful... umm... what other words are there for good?

I like this alot. Short and simple, yet holds a moral everyone should know. Keep it up! =)

ps: There was this line "But then a again". I don't know if its the fault of the writer or the computer, but just pointing out that one single grammatical error. ^^ Hope that helps!

~Eyes of Amethyst

nice way of putting 'perfection' into a poem. It gives vivid description of what some people think they are. Keep on writing, I'll be waiting!

~lightningSphinX~

Oh, wonderfully refreshing. Um, you wouldn't be offended if I said this was cute, right? Because I really do like it.

Fantastic work. = )