Reminds me alot of Ryudo from Grandia 2, but all in all nice job man! When you get the chance, check out my story Guilty Act, I believe you'll like it. Anyways nice job on the first chapter.

It's good, your story's good man!

good chapter man! I hope you will please go read and review Chapter 3 of Path of Choas.

Dude nice! I just wanted to tell you if you still want to read path of chaos I will be posting Chapter 3 soon. If you get the time please go and drop a review for Chapter 2. Thanks

~hellsage~

That

Man, that ending was great! Kind of sad, but how it ended there just felt like the perfect ending. A tip, don't make a sequel. That ending was good enough there because there felt like there was so much energy, and I think a sequel would really kill it. The dying line at the end just took it off to imagination. THis was an excellent story.

But it's your choice, anyways, I love this story too much. Excellent job!

I ope your next story ranges into something much more now that you have this.

Peace man!

Darket

Nice very nice. I like it. I just posted a new Chapter. Review if you get the time.

Good chapter, I'm adding the story to my favorites.BTW, whenever you get the chance, read my story Angel's Halo: Devil's Rising and leave a review ther; I'll review back!See ya!

Short but nice anyway. (continues reading the next chapters.)

Interesting overall, to the next chapter!

Wow what a chapter i see u took the quick way of ending this. Just go back and change it somtine later in life.

Finally, I was wondering when this would update. So the next chapter is the end? That's too bad... Anyways, I await the conclusion to this. This was a good chapter, and a good story...

Peace

She's the what? Come on, when are you going to update? I'm waiting, this is good! I can't believe I caught up though. THese chapters are quick reading, but I am usually on the net at ten minutes some times. Keep writing.

Peace

YES! Good chapter. I'm almost done too! YAY!

Cool chapter. I really need to finish this. I'm so far behind now :(