i like it muchly, very, i dont know, sensual, i felt it, muchly well done

In parts it seems less poetric, and more fic- or prose-like. The blocks are initially off-putting, but once read, aside from the words that went straight over my head, it's good.

wow.. insanely powerful & well done

amazing, the word use and th way it inertwines with drug use is just beautiful but also a bit surreal. O__O I have no clue why, it just seems that way. ^^; well done, beautiful word use and the format is what makes this its own. well done, keep up the great work!

!~* noelle *~!