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| Unready 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abusewhymsically pleasant "Uh...wow...for once I'm speechless. This is amazing... Could I...print a copy and give it to a friend or two?" sure you can. thanks for the review |
| Closed for remodeling 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute and funny. keep up the good work. |
| corner of your heart 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely the weirdest thing I have ever read. But it really amused me. Such a clever idea! Some of the rhyming and rhythm was a little off, but it doesn’t really matter because this was so funny that it made it great. Very, very cute. Great work, keep it up! |
| strawberryblitz 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like the beginning but the last to lines just don't really fit well with the others in the ryhming pattern.. But other than that its pretty awesome. |
| too_critical 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWeird. Who thinks of writing about these things. Some of your rhymes don't work. |
| youzi 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abusereally weird..and funny.i dunno...irrelevant..but in a nice way. keep writing =D |
| Bookgirl2021 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't actually have a bf, but my friend suggested it. I thought it would be funny to do this so...whatever. :) |