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| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-12-04 ch 39,   | Hiya Great story - really enjoyed it. I'm glad that you decided to finish it. Angel |
| Duuude 2008-11-24 ch 13, | Omgsh. I feel so late for not knowing who Steve Irwin was! He's the crocodile hunter, right? Oh yes, he died. It was so long ago though, was this chapter written then or something? Anyway, I really like this. Eve and Adam, hm. They don't seem to match too much at this point. And I really like that. I hate it when authors jump into it and we can already see the sparks flying. You managed to hint at it quite subtly. It was good. I do not like Adam. At all. Whatever reason he has isn't really acceptable. Most authors make the bad boy likeable which he shouldn't be. And you didn't do that which I commend you for as well. What I'm trying to say is, you're very realistic. I like that. It's a cliched storyline, bad boy and good girl. But I like their personalities and uniqueness (word?). It makes it all interesting. Adam and Eve, eh? And you know what I loved especially? That she didn't mind that he called her Eve. That was cute. =) |
| Ravina 2008-11-02 ch 39, | I L-O-V-E-D it! I can't wait to read more of your work! - Rebekah |
| Jayjack 2008-10-15 ch 39, | awe :') that was so cute. i loved it. :D |
| Panther92 2008-10-12 ch 9, | I love ur story at first i was hesitant and i didnt want to read it but now that i have i dont regret it. |
| Welcome To Meganland x3 2008-10-09 ch 39, | I love how i always know what will happen but I still love them all the same. This was absolutely amazing. You have no idea how much i love it. I thought it was so cute and I always get kind of biased when its the popular guy going for the girl. I just like it better than the girl begging. Okay, so you did wonderful xD |
| wistfulpearl 2008-10-05 ch 39, | yay! they finally got together! i enjoyed reading this and it was really sweet. keep up the good work! |
| Where di Jordan go? 2008-09-28 ch 25, | “Yeah but sometimes it’s better that way,” Evelyn said. They ate in silence for a moment, but it wasn’t awkward like Evelyn would’ve suspected. “What about you?” she asked, “any other siblings?” “Actually, yes. I have two brothers and another sister. My oldest brother, Will is twenty-two and Gunter is eighteen. Nikki is sixteen.” What about JOrdan^? |
| smile at the sun 2008-09-26 ch 2, | great writing, i really loved this story. I loved Evelyn and Adam, the plot, the funny dialogue, the way the story flowed. I was sad to see it end, but it was a great story. Thankyou very much! |
| - mitsukii - 2008-09-10 ch 39, | OMGSH DAT WAS A CUTE STORY! i love it |
| hydra-star1 2008-08-07 ch 39, | I adored this story. I just read the entire thing straight through. It waisted pretty much my entire day. XD It's fabulous. I'm sorry that it's already over. You did a wonderful job. |
| katieee 2008-08-05 ch 39, | I really wanted them to get together eaarlier in the story so that we could see more of them like they were at the ending, but I liked it none the less. At least they got together! Yay Adam! :) |
| katieee 2008-08-05 ch 16, | I love this chapter too. :) |
| katieee 2008-08-05 ch 11, | :) We. Adam. |
| katieee 2008-08-05 ch 10, | :( I love Adam. :) I really really do. His attitude, is . . . nice? Ahahaha. I can't rmemeber. x) |