While I can see the potential for this story-and I will continue reading, because I have a feeling it will be good-I just don't like your main character, Eve, at all. I know you already stated that she was a cynic/realist, but she comes off as extremely snarky and irritating. (When she talks of throttling others, I kind of want to do the same to her. :P) I don't like the fact that she snaps at any little thing Adam says, especially when he's clearly joking. Anyway, it's just a little criticism... I'm really not trying to be harsh. Hopefully, I'll warm up to her by the end.

This was a good story, and very well-written.

Well done, and keep up the good work.

haha oh my gosh! i remember this story! i'm just adding it to my favorite list now! haha oh man! this was GOOD.

oh. my. god. i've only read about 2 chapters of this story, and i'm already loving it. It's totally refreshing. and i can already imagine Adam looking like a hot babe

Hiya

Great story - really enjoyed it. I'm glad that you decided to finish it.

Angel

Omgsh. I feel so late for not knowing who Steve Irwin was! He's the crocodile hunter, right? Oh yes, he died. It was so long ago though, was this chapter written then or something?

Anyway, I really like this. Eve and Adam, hm. They don't seem to match too much at this point. And I really like that. I hate it when authors jump into it and we can already see the sparks flying. You managed to hint at it quite subtly. It was good.

I do not like Adam. At all. Whatever reason he has isn't really acceptable. Most authors make the bad boy likeable which he shouldn't be. And you didn't do that which I commend you for as well.

What I'm trying to say is, you're very realistic. I like that. It's a cliched storyline, bad boy and good girl. But I like their personalities and uniqueness (word?). It makes it all interesting. Adam and Eve, eh?

And you know what I loved especially? That she didn't mind that he called her Eve. That was cute. )

I L-O-V-E-D it! I can't wait to read more of your work!

- Rebekah

awe :') that was so cute. i loved it. :D

I love ur story at first i was hesitant and i didnt want to read it but now that i have i dont regret it.

I love how i always know what will happen but I still love them all the same.

This was absolutely amazing.

You have no idea how much i love it.

I thought it was so cute and I always get kind of biased when its the popular guy going for the girl.

I just like it better than the girl begging.

Okay, so you did wonderful xD

yay! they finally got together! i enjoyed reading this and it was really sweet. keep up the good work!

“Yeah but sometimes it’s better that way,” Evelyn said. They ate in silence for a moment, but it wasn’t awkward like Evelyn would’ve suspected. “What about you?” she asked, “any other siblings?”

“Actually, yes. I have two brothers and another sister. My oldest brother, Will is twenty-two and Gunter is eighteen. Nikki is sixteen.”

What about JOrdan?

great writing, i really loved this story. I loved Evelyn and Adam, the plot, the funny dialogue, the way the story flowed. I was sad to see it end, but it was a great story. Thankyou very much!

OMGSH DAT WAS A CUTE STORY!

i love it

I adored this story. I just read the entire thing straight through. It waisted pretty much my entire day. XD It's fabulous. I'm sorry that it's already over. You did a wonderful job.