this is very strong to me, with a good metaphor, so i think. very well done.

HAhaha,... nicely put... I like it, alot... hahahhaa, a new fav...

lol, I really enjoyed this one. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, I just got a new job working at Pizza Hut. :) Wish me luck! Great poem, btw. I really enjoyed it and thought it true and insightful.

Yeah! Finally, a poem that tells all. I think every woman can relate to this. Great job!

Interesting poem you wrote. I'm glad you posted it because it made me ponder about things.

maggie