I like how he preceives things, it's almost like he's blind or something! I like!

I love him. He's very interesting ^^. You're very good at describing human society through the eyes of another completely foreign species n.n.

He's going to open his eyes soon.

Whoa... this is weird. Defidently a different way to looking at out world throught this 'thing's eyes.

It doesn't take a heck of a lot of thinking to realize what he talks about when he's discovering wind, skinning his knee, etc. He also describes it in a very literal, almost comical way. Keep it up.

He's gunna change into a human! And he seems smarter than the rest, or at least more intelligent as an individual, instead of as a group. -pets him with 20ft. long pole-

It is a little bit rambling, but nothing serious. It is missing one thing that is important though: Dialogue. You know, the kind with the quotes and stuff? Usually you'll see some people that go over-the-top with it, but I don't think there was any in this story at all.

Antartic travellers are usually roped together, especially in uncharted land. Keeps them all together during whitouts and if one hits a crevass, the others have a chance to pull them out. -prattles on- ...

I like this. The change is a little awkward between Tommy's ruminations and indignation and her experiances (action) with the tank.