|Reviews for chrysalis|
| GypsyMothra 6/22/05 . chapter 1
Beautifully conveys the message. (Nice title by the way.) The last line hits like a punch in the gut after reading the lines above.
| AboveTheSalt 6/19/05 . chapter 1
lovely (yet tragic) description of the - erhm, shall we say "leap" - into adulthood. is there no inbetween anymore? great portrayal.
| simpleplan13 6/7/05 . chapter 1
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/6/05 . chapter 1
A pleasing, sensual image, brief but lingering.
| linaeve 6/6/05 . chapter 1
oh, what a perfect illustration of that tenuous transition from girl to almost-woman. simply amazing.
| lackluster 6/6/05 . chapter 1
i love it! one of my favorites for sure, it has this special tone to it, and it's just amazing!
| pneumothorax 6/6/05 . chapter 1
Wonderfully sad. Shimmyshimmy on.
| poetic abortion 6/6/05 . chapter 1
thank you, yes I fixed the mistake and I'm glad you reminded me. ; that was embarressing. XDD I really love this, lovely lovely sentences and breath taking word use. again amazing and well done! _ I love it!
!* noelle *!
| twenty-second seduction 6/6/05 . chapter 1
ah, the loss of innocence portrayed very well.
| WiredWords 6/6/05 . chapter 1
that's exactly how it feels to be at that part in life. cool