 Phoenix 2008-02-27 . chapter 1 Thank you! Thank you for writing this story. I came on here looking for a story like this, and I am so grateful to have found it. It was wonderful, and it really captured the magic I hope I will experience one day when I marry. |
 Aranel.Raina 2007-05-26 . chapter 1 Aw! That's so cute!
I really really like it. The sentences aren't too long, but they're not too short either. It is extremely well written, and the story is a very touching one.
Good job! |
 Aranel.Raina 2007-05-26 . chapter 1 Aw! That's so cute!
I really really like it. The sentences aren't too long, but they're not too short either. It is extremely well written, and the story is a very touching one.
Good job! |
 Zendol the Ugly 2006-06-04 . chapter 1 Cute. I liked it. |
 Andreea Chandler 2006-05-14 . chapter 1Aw, so sweet. :)
Beautiful story, and your writing is truly excellent. It doesn't sound like you're trying too hard, but it still comes out in a unique, skilled style. You vary your sentence structure and use descriptive but not overdone words. Your grammar and spelling are also impeccable, which I appreciate greatly in a world of sloppy netspeak.
Keep up the good work! |
 Adorian 2005-12-20 . chapter 1GO ANN GO! YOU ROCK! Z |
 christiangrl247 2005-09-14 . chapter 1Oh my gosh! That was awesome! So sweet! I want a love like that! |
 Liz 2005-07-17 . chapter 1 Aw...that was so cute! I loved it! It was really realistic and just so sweet! You need to write lots more! |
 Sendy 2005-07-11 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness... that was just beautiful! It truly was perfect... amazing! |
 D L Dzioba 2005-06-06 . chapter 1Wow... Just wow. Darling, I love the way you write. Its wonderful, amazing... Beautiful... I'm in awe. |