Although I havnt readanything I havnt liked of yours, I really like this one. Like your usual wonderful self you have captured a thought and forced it down long enough to write down everything about it. You shape it before our eyes and make it into tomthing worthy of Salvador Dali (I think that is how you spell it). I really like this, I may not have read much of your things in the past, but from the last thing I read, you wrok has changd dramaticly. You know focus on the core ideas and colors and facts. This is not a bad thing. I need you to know it isnt nessisarily a good one either. Balance is good, and I hope I dont sound to brutal. You see almost all os the thought, yet much of the emotion is hidden. This may be how you wanted it, or I may just be crazed and dillusional. Either one works for me. Unfortunatly I have no real advice, and if I did I may not even say it. YOu are a great writer (far better than me) and it would be as though I were critisizing an artist whose work os sold for millions. OR me yelling at a millionare for not taking care of thier money. YOu are a great author, and I love reading your works. I aplologize both for my lack of a review, and for my absence. I will try to write more and review more (oops, getting off track) anyway. Once again great job, and well done.~Beth M. Snow

Great poem, couldve used more rhyme, but over all it was... very interesting. Take care ~Vlad