|Reviews for afterbite|
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/22/05 . chapter 1
What a change in emotion have way through. Very subtle and well done. One thinks that the sensual description is one written favorably and it turns out to be of loathing.
| Captain Blunderbuss 6/8/05 . chapter 1
Ick. I have to say, you really are effective in getting your feelings across. First of the exilleration of his embrace, but then the skin-crawling hate spawned of his trechery. Relationship gone wrong, am I right? I find that that's where most poetry comes from. I'm not saying it has to go wrong, but relationships in general. *shrug*