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Reviews For: What Good do Tears Do?

Slowly Sinking
2005-06-06
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written, deeply moving, especially the end. The repetition of 'pointless' is really effective.
Cloud Burst
2005-06-06
ch 1,
abusebeautiful depth and very tragic. lovely work!
Lellida
2005-06-06
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, that last line is really thought-provoking. Not a bad poem, though it pretty much just seems to be emotions slapped together (that's not a bad thing or anything!) Very sad and emotional.
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