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| Slowly Sinking 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, deeply moving, especially the end. The repetition of 'pointless' is really effective. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abusebeautiful depth and very tragic. lovely work! |
| Lellida 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, that last line is really thought-provoking. Not a bad poem, though it pretty much just seems to be emotions slapped together (that's not a bad thing or anything!) Very sad and emotional. |