ooh very nice! its creepy and heavenly at the same time. i like it.

-sunshine

It rhymes...Cool, it does! I just write, and do not know what I am writing until I either post it or reread it...

Thanks for reviewing my poem ;)

This poem is seriously cool - you've included all the traditional elements of horror as well as an originality which shows in your rhymes! Well done!

Ethereal Kisses

I like it!