 cornered.sensations 2006-01-05 . chapter 1that was very unique, i love it how you use the word 'bountiful'. Keep writing. |
 not sure yet 2005-09-20 . chapter 1interesting, women, ive been feeling the differences a bit more keenly lately between men and women since ive been going to college where it's over 75% male, heh, definitely some thoughts here, i liked it, well done |
 esotericblood 2005-07-11 . chapter 1very nice, it is quite confusing to find what it means, to you, to be a woman, with modern society throwing a barrage of contradicting images of femininity. I liked this very much. |
 INTP 2005-07-02 . chapter 1You have such an archaic, almost formal, style. You reminded me of Keats in, I think, "Lugubrious," and you do now with your sharp, eloquently stated questions and your unusual diction. Not to mention the whole universal application of your material with an original way of expressing it. Your images are so full and clear, the "cast of humanity" is such a great comparison to the function of women as wombs. And the "castrated males" analogy is yet another impeccable way of describing how society views women. Anyway, I think you also in one more way represent Keats; you stir up all of these questions and mystery and you let your reader have all of the fun and challenge of solving them. |
 simpleplan13 2005-06-07 . chapter 1great questions |
 ShadowPharoh 2005-06-07 . chapter 1beautiful and very different (that's a good thing, fyi) great job!
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