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Reviews For: If ever

lindserly 2005-06-10 ch 1,	abusethis is utterly brilliant. i love it. love the general idea behind the poem.
Venz0r 2005-06-07 ch 1,	abuseHaha.. It makes me sad to see someone with less reviews than me. I thought I didn't get enough. Anyway. All these if evers, I wonder "if" these events "ever" came true.. we'd all be in a very dark place. But you make good points, as to what could happen when certain things changed. Of course, imagery, but I like it.
dustytiger 2005-06-06 ch 1,	abusethis is really good, and such a powerful message, wow, this is really good, it really gets you thinking, wonderful work, thank you for sharing