Wow, this was very well-written and overall creepy! The ending gave me goosebumps. You are a very good writer... keep it up!

I love it. Yes, I followed you here from I noticed one small detail that didn't make sense. "Escape never even crossed my mind all the years I was with him." She was only there for one year, so it might make more sense to say time instead of years.

Tsukiko

That was one of the best books ever written on fictionpress. I am SO admiring your skills, and i won't be surprised if you have published stories. Please, make other stories, this is SO good!!

meh

oh. my. god. that is freaky! that must really suck...

That was great write more stories like this one that is awesome! oh and is Ethan the father or was he the father you just mistaken for ethan??!! write me