freeky. Its good to have a different prospective.

Hmm, well I did find the whole block paragraph style utterly frustrating because this piece can become soo much more... However, ending it with that line, that I have read, most of us readers love, made it all come together. So it was good...hope to see more though.

Very, disturbing. I like it.

Scarry.

Good Job.

Very interesting persepective on a serial killer. It conjured up some vivid images. I especially liked the last line, "She could only kill again, and again, until the faces became blurred in her memory and the voices faded together and into nothingness."

Good job! And thanks for reviewing my stories :)