Woah... I have goosbumps: that's so brilliant! i ahve a thing for rhyming poems/ songs (I don't properly know the difference) I lvoe the bridge, and the first verse... and the second... and... well all of it! it was brilliant!

i really liked this too! repetitive i know but i really did. this especially because in most poems i'll find parts i like and parts, especially in songs because they depend on music. BUT i liked every part of this one. rhyme and all (wich is difficult). keep up the good work.

If you can't already tell, I love your work. This. Is. AWESOME! I wish I could write like that, I really wish I could.

powerful song. really good. keep up the great song writing.-soren

Wow...I can't believe this didn't get reviews. Well...here's one! This is great!

Ok, if you can't tell by now, I love your songs. They all rock, so keep writing...PLEASE?