Oh, wow. That was unexpected. Interesting, though. More?

Oh, I liked this story! I don't know if i should because it was all like INCEST and all but, lol, can't help it. It actually made me giggle a bit at the end where they're all like trying to tell Jen they're in love and she just comes out with the fact that Eric is his son! Wow. It really is funny.

You've probably heard this before, but, DISTURBING. Errgh. I can understand them sleeping together, even falling in love, but once they found out they were related, wouldn't it feel totally repugnant? I mean, imagine sleeping with a close relative, even if you've never met in your life before!

And "Jen, fortunately was easy to convince"? Forgive my disbelieving choking noises. Even in abstract, I find the idea of a son sleeping with his parent, much less MY son, totally disturbing. If I were Jen, I would be doing my utmost best to convince them of how utterly weird the idea was. I might give in eventually, but not that damn easily.

As one of my friends said:

"It's like a greek tragedy!!...or maybe a greek comedy...Maybe this story is just an excersise in the unbelievable? *hopes*"

That fairly much sums up my view.

what the **.

he is sleeping with his son? kudos for trying such a forbidden topic, but come on. he splits with his wife, she has his child, the child whores himself, the parent pays for the child's lovemaking for a year, they discover their relation and aren't bothered at all? whatever.

and again, what the **.

Woah, I read this and was torn between laughing and feeling sorry for them. In short, I loved it, I did. I never expected it to end the way it did. Even when Jen showed up at the door, it didn't sink in quite yet.

Very, very wonderful. ^^

Talking about a fairy tale...O.o...

ooh, this is the first father/son story I've ever read, and I'm very very fascinated. Plus Eric's such a cutie how could anyone say no to him

You do know that this at least deserves a warning for the reader? Nicely written, though I think it would do better as a slightly longer story- its kind of hard to get into the characters, though that could because I knew what was happening...

I knew it! Right when I read the summary I knew it! YOU ROCK! This kind of story had been madly on my mind and it is awesome that you had the balls to write soemthing like this that wasn't absolute smut. -grabd you and dances with you about the room-

It's impossible for him to be his son! It said they hadn't slept together for the two weeks they'd been married, and he left for California, so unless he Fed-exed his sperm, it's impossible... right?

ah...wow. i...wow. it's rather funny though, come to think of it. *snickers lowly* fairy-tale ending? really? *arches eyebrow*

interesting...i found that very interesting. i liked it. it was quite touching. please, continue, tho that would do well as a one-shot also. if that was your intention, sorry for babbling on. ^_^

Hm. Don't really know what to think. I was confused at the start, I didn't realise so much time had passed. and I also thought the ending was rushed...But i still loved it because you're an awesome writer. Keep it up!