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| SongWriter13 2006-03-12 ch 1, | Weird... I can see why you have no idea... I honestly have no clue what to say about this thing... |
| Luthiena o Lorien 2005-11-12 ch 1, | ...Simply amazing. I love the formal tone of it. Oh, and I shall critique your chapter on Critique Circle very soon! |
| Moonjava 2005-08-24 ch 1, | Oh, I like this. Kind of made me think of Prince Charming for some reason. |
| Kris-chan 2005-06-07 ch 1, | I like it... o-o; dunno what else to say other than that... um. yea.. bye! ^^ |
| NumblesTheAuthor 2005-06-07 ch 1, | wowie this is crepy...lol but really good tho...the thee's and thy's made it really feel like a 17th century british aristocrat serving his upper-class lady...maybe that's just what i think lol but i love it! |
| Darisha 2005-06-07 ch 1, | I really like how you've written this. Your choice of language gives it a classic tone that implies a sense of passion and old world romance in a way. Nice work ^^ |