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Reviews For: Passion’s Promise With No Certain End

SongWriter13
2006-03-12
ch 1,
Weird... I can see why you have no idea... I honestly have no clue what to say about this thing...
Luthiena o Lorien
2005-11-12
ch 1,
...Simply amazing. I love the formal tone of it. Oh, and I shall critique your chapter on Critique Circle very soon!
Moonjava
2005-08-24
ch 1,
Oh, I like this. Kind of made me think of Prince Charming for some reason.
Kris-chan
2005-06-07
ch 1,
I like it... o-o; dunno what else to say other than that... um. yea.. bye! ^^
NumblesTheAuthor
2005-06-07
ch 1,
wowie this is crepy...lol but really good tho...the thee's and thy's made it really feel like a 17th century british aristocrat serving his upper-class lady...maybe that's just what i think lol but i love it!
Darisha
2005-06-07
ch 1,
I really like how you've written this. Your choice of language gives it a classic tone that implies a sense of passion and old world romance in a way. Nice work ^^
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