 Caedes 2007-05-16 . chapter 1 I really liked it, actually. It was quite well done. Iuno, though, besides being well-written and interesting, it didn't make much of an impact, I suppose. I liked it, but just for the appreciation of appreciating it. |
 saeger 2005-08-06 . chapter 1 A) I've reviewed this already. ^^B) I wanted to ask before another e-mail- are we ever gonna get a name for these people? Is there ever going to be an end? Because at the very end would be an awesome place to finally reveal their names... But the downside is, I don't want them to end... ::pouts::I had to go back adn re-read them all. ^^ Still amazing as ever. |
 Saeger 2005-06-10 . chapter 1That's so sad! But cutely so, but that's... just cuz Im twisted like that. Yeah I liked it! I think you got the shock of it pretty well- I've seen people lose others, an... I think you got one of the reactions pretty well. I like his (I think it's a he...) trying to comfort her. And the rain was a nice touch to the mood. ^^ |
 Arrina 2005-06-07 . chapter 1You did that well sister (I mean that by the way)*sticks out tongue* By the way it still appears that the two are boys. |
 Sherika White 2005-06-07 . chapter 1I find it pretty interesting, the way you wrote your story. I like it. |
 Kaimelar, Ruler of Hyarme 2005-06-07 . chapter 1That's beautiful. You know who I am, so you know that this piece expressed one of my fears quite well. Thank you. |