|Reviews for purity doused with ink|
| White Tea and Ginger 9/29/05 . chapter 1
Once again, an amazing piece. I love this.
| the naked civil servant 8/9/05 . chapter 1
my favourite of yours. such perfect photogenic decadence :P
| GypsyMothra 6/22/05 . chapter 1
You have this totally serious beginning, and then the last line. I dont't think it was intended to be a laugh-out-loud, knee-slapper, just a sarcastic aside, perhaps. Your poems are true art.
| pneumothorax 6/11/05 . chapter 1
It's .. good. and for once, I have nothing to say about it :(
| WiredWords 6/8/05 . chapter 1
so many poets attempt to cover huge topics with little poems. like love or hate or sadness.
you pick moments, scenes...characters. And you stretch them out on the page. With intense and painfully good descriptions. The things you choose to highlight and describe...you carve out your words differently than the average person.
This is wonderful. It's...obscenely good. (thanks for reviewing my poetry)
| addie pray 6/8/05 . chapter 1
This was written ectasy (pure as fresh heroin).
| the duck in the rain 6/8/05 . chapter 1
*le sigh sorry to steal your description *is ashamed.
I read this poem that reads like prose and really fell in love with it. Of course I didn't leave any review because I suck. the word choice is as always AFRIGGINMAZING. The way you word things...the descriptions and scenes you create...they just blow me away. I can only dream to write as good as you do.
I couldn't think of a way to end my poem, so I was thinking of things that inspired me and instantly this came to my mind. I decided to try and not completely steal it. _
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/7/05 . chapter 1
I like this cry out against the typical brain-washing ideals of Valentine's Day. Great sarcasm.
| lackluster 6/7/05 . chapter 1
i can just picture it so well...beautiful!
| Black Painted Gypsy 6/7/05 . chapter 1
This poem uses imagery rather well, in fact, it is to the point where I can see the subject matter, as if I was actually there. Also, the way your oem is structured, it gives the feel of a continuous motion without any pauses, it dds to the overall flow of this piece.
| poetic abortion 6/7/05 . chapter 2
beautiful, again a loss of words to the beauty this holds.. keep up the great work! _
!* noelle *!
| poetic abortion 6/7/05 . chapter 1
a beautiful and tad humurous poem toward the end. love the word use, humurous twist toward the end that is depicted well. great job! lovely as always!
!* noelle *!
| CW-nerd-12 6/7/05 . chapter 1
this is really good. I don't know for sure if the prose layout works for this, I'd suggest at least putting it in poetry format and getting some feedback on both, but that's me. Anyway, I really do like this! Keep writin'!
| lacking motivation 6/7/05 . chapter 1
so are boxes of chocolates. quite excellent and an intriguing style.