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| criceto-verde 2005-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseHey!Your grammar needs a little work but otherwise you have a great start here. I'm very interested as to why this poor guy is in so much danger. Your description is vivid and well done, almost too well done! This is very good, and I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poem. Keep up the great work!Criceto-verde |
| Elen Brochwel 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseWell! Kind of like a thriller I'm attempting to write, but still...it's good. How about updating soon? It reminds me of that old tv show called Rat Patrol. |