Hey! I've finally decided to repay my reviewers by reviewing their work. Anyway, onto the C/C...

This reminded me of a song. As in, I felt like it would sound good with harmony and such. One mistake: "Every time I run your there behind me" your should be you're, as in you are.

Overall, I feel like this could benefit from some punctuation, but mostly I like it should be sung. Great work!