|Reviews for Eternal Silence|
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 9/14/05 . chapter 1
Nice...lots of action in the beginning, then stops to a dramatic hush! Very good.
| Seaspray 8/23/05 . chapter 1
Gosh that's sad- that last line really hits hard, it contrasts well with the activeness of the first two lines. Very powerful.
| The Postscript 7/28/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful...it really brings the feelings and emotions of the Tsunami closer...makes it more real. Great job. I like your writing style. :) Keep writing!
| senbi 6/7/05 . chapter 1
I like the way your words potray the devastation & loss. Beautifully done.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/7/05 . chapter 1
Is this to be about the Tsunami? Oh, just read your summary. Then I was correct! A testament to the skill of this poem, it expressed precisely those lost emotions. Well done.
| Slowly Sinking 6/7/05 . chapter 1
I personally would replace 'and' in the 2nd line with -, but that's just me. I don't like haikus personally - too rigid for me - but this is good, very powerful with a strong ending. Good work.