Nice...lots of action in the beginning, then stops to a dramatic hush! Very good.

Gosh that's sad- that last line really hits hard, it contrasts well with the activeness of the first two lines. Very powerful.

Wonderful...it really brings the feelings and emotions of the Tsunami closer...makes it more real. Great job. I like your writing style. :) Keep writing!

I like the way your words potray the devastation & loss. Beautifully done.

Is this to be about the Tsunami? Oh, just read your summary. Then I was correct! A testament to the skill of this poem, it expressed precisely those lost emotions. Well done.

I personally would replace 'and' in the 2nd line with -, but that's just me. I don't like haikus personally - too rigid for me - but this is good, very powerful with a strong ending. Good work.