You have good sentence fluency, great organization, and good voice, but I don't understand your word choice. . .Heh, just kidding. Another great poem.

thank you for stressing the unreliability.

extremely well-written and i can think of no better way to ease into the topic but with comparasions to past times (the basis of all liberal/conservative debate, no?) and i appreciate the unbiast and throught provoking ideas