Reviews for A Shadow and A Song

Certain Attributes
2005-09-24
ch 1,

abuseAw, Jen this is really top knotch work. I love it. You have a really wonderful way of working imagery into rhyme, a lot of poets have trouble with that task. This far surpasses the work of the average teenager.

Bragi
2005-06-10
ch 1,

abuseI love everything you write- It reads like it was written effortlessly, but I could've taken a week to conjur up the imagery in a single line of your poems. To quote Edward Everett: "I wish I could have said in two hours what you said in two minutes". Suffice it to say, it was among the best.As for your title problem- usually what I do when I can't find a title is pick my favorite phrase from the poem. "A Shadow and a Song", perhaps?

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